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Old 05-04-05, 01:28 AM   #3
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leave you rest'n pz's
 
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complexity needs work, flow fell off in points
some decent concepts, but for a keystyle this was
aight, overall big city nailed alot of points about
your verse, try to expand on them thou
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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