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Voted For: Lay-Text
ok this was actualy a preety decent battle and CALI dont have this vote dqed becuase you asked me on AIM to vote on this..
CALI, i liked your shit the personals hit but i was tired of clicking links and shit, and if you have to explain your punches then you shouldnt use them, so basically that is where you feel off at, you should have had some ebtter metaphores also, personals and punches where coo but you also need to be creative, all in all i was feeling this but you lacked in some spaces and you where not too creative
lay text, i liked your shit, you could have used a lil more personals but your metaphores where pretty decent and you has a lil more creatitie then CALI, your closer was some what original something thaT I have never saw before which i liked alot, considering ive been here a long time but for your creaitivitie you get my vote
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