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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP:
Voted For: John Holmes
Aiight look neither came with amazing heat in this.. Wasnt bad-- Just not as good as what I'd of hoped for.. But heres my breakdown..
Dude is all mouth got k.oed by the last dude he called out
Left r.v for the fall?...of course all birds get called south!!
^Only problem with this bar is it dont connect, otherwise it was a good line
No flow little homo only audio win is a no show
Ya punches is so so still undevolped like cell phone photos!!
^Not as good as the first one.. Second line is pretty generic and weak..
No respect only beat 4 vets i checked ya stats(1)
Nobody likes you!!...you getno replies on ya audio tracks!!
^Personals are ok.. Very weak punchline though, its just stating facts..
Your only chance to 'Elevate' is when you move in a month(2)
Yeah we know you 'Restricked'.....from throwing a dope punch!!(3)
^I aint read many of ®'s battles so I dunno if he gets that line a lot but it was a pretty well carried out line..
Good name lame cuz yous a groupie 'laytext' wrap over a penis
He got a gallon of wackness.......annd only a 'Drop of Genius'!(4)
^Name wordplay was aiight, but should of been worded better.. And the title reference was aiight too..
Overall-- Not an overly bad verse, but I've seen a lot better..
Your Wack Kid....You Can't Handle The Shit That I'm Spittin..
Man..Your Reign Of RV Wasn't Short..Dude It Was Non-Existent..
^First line was mostly comprised of filler.. Second line was ok..
Whats Funny Is..In Audio I've Heard Your Skill Compared To L.I..
A Top Vet?..Nah..Even DeadlyVision Said Your A Disgrace To A.I..
^First line was weak because cali doesent sound like LI, its not really an effective diss.. Second line was like the one cali did, it was just stating facts, no real concept for a punchline..
Look Faggot You Can't See Me..Like Bats Looking At Red Signs..
And By Battling You...Rated Will Be Sure To Meet Dead Lines..
^This whole bar does nothing for you.. Its a little bit of self glorification and no actual diss in the second line..
You Were Born?! What Happen?...Dennis The Mennis Fuck Shamoo?
You Claim To Be God..and God Loves Ugly..So Then Out Came You..
^This line was boring too.. Some link that didnt work for me.. And a punchline on the second line that didnt make sense.. He claims to be god, and since god loves ugly, out comes him? I know your trying to say hes ugly, but you really needed to word that better..
Listen To Everyone..Your Wack..Man Let That Shit Get Through..
Since You Like Arrows...Lets Put It This Way...I'm > Than U..
^I get the picture your struggling for concepts badly in this battle..
Overall-- Not as impressive as I would of liked to see from you man..
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I think that its pretty obvious cali came out better in this.. Like I said, wasnt the hottest battle out, but there is a clear line of who came better in this...
v/ cali.
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