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Old 05-04-05, 11:08 AM   #25
Luse Cannon
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Voted For: Daubs

This guy duabs aint 2-0,he just reset his record/
ima enjoy this win over u like trojans,its just my pleasure/
this was an aight bar think it wouldve been better if you wouldve worded it differently.

this dick won a few battles,so now he wanna get little cocky/
so ima run steps up this niggas face,like rocky/
the dick and cocky shit was wack the rocky part was good. but it didnt really go nowhere when u talkin bout runnin up someones face

and i got heat that'll take your, sleeves off like summer time/
and you the type of nigga that wish he could flow some of time/
Gun talk is worthless on the net unless its in an open mic or Song. and the second line was wack.

only burner you saw,was on the top of your stove/
dont post just dissapear like,a magic show/
no comment

Push this bitch aside, like a plough through thick snow..
Post a verse when its accepted??
Then that decision you selected wasnt the best...as you lost by a no-show!!
last line was kinda stretched but an aight personal

When you called me out, i didn't set a battle, i set-a-war...
We know you want to be something else....hence the metaphor!!
line is aight. good use of the definition of metaphor but did really hit as hard as it could wit better wording.

I must be clever like a statition or even a mathmatician see..
Because il turn your battle numbers...into multiples of three!!
Won the battle for u right here. loved the last line. i knew where u was goin wit it and i was goin to check his battle stats until i saw u left an explanation for it.

it was a mediorcre battle but Daubs won it because of his closer.
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