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Old 05-04-05, 11:13 AM   #11
King Solo
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aight check it

i see all these people givin ya near perfect scores cuz ya know they suckin up to ya!!!!

structure - can't fault ya on this, it was perfect lines were not stretched and every one was kept together.
flow - flow was on point, perfect structure grants you a decent flow all the way through.........
topic - the idea for ya open mic was nice, ya delivered a message through ya rhymes like teph said and ya didn't fall off at all, ya stayed with it all the way.
vocab - the vocab was nice, a couple of parts where it was real decent but some points where it seemed rather basic to me...so ya cud work on that.

overall i think it was a tight drop - 7/10
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