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Old 05-04-05, 03:06 PM   #10
Kawn Flixx
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This was a good drop i was really feeling it ,
Structure was okay , could have been better
You Had some nice punchlines , some good solid ones..
Some were alittle weak and fell short
Concept was good, you had some nice wordplay
nice vocab , and some nice creativity.. overall
this was a dope drop..keep it up ,

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