Voted For: Lay-Text

Your Wack Kid....You Can't Handle The Shit That I'm Spittin..
Man..Your Reign Of RV Wasn't Short..Dude It Was Non-Existent..
-Glory on the fist line, the 2nd line had a decent punch nice


Whats Funny Is..In Audio I've Heard Your Skill Compared To L.I..
A Top Vet?..Nah..Even DeadlyVision Said Your A Disgrace To A.I..
-Nice personal w/ a punch


Look Faggot You Can't See Me..Like Bats Looking At Red Signs..
And By Battling You...Rated Will Be Sure To Meet Dead Lines..
-Decent punch


You Were Born?! What Happen?...Dennis The Mennis Fuck Shamoo?
You Claim To Be God..and God Loves Ugly..So Then Out Came You..
-The 1st line had my rolling, and the 2nd line wat a bit played


Listen To Everyone..Your Wack..Man Let That Shit Get Through..
Since You Like Arrows...Lets Put It This Way...I'm > Than U..
-Decent closer w/ a personal and a punch


overall=This was a good verse, you had decent punches w/ personals. Flowed pretty well. Wordplays was good also. The God dont like ugly was a bit played, but you worded to make it a effective punch.




Dude is all mouth got k.oed by the last dude he called out
Left r.v for the fall?...of course all birds get called south!!
-Decent punch with a personal


No flow little homo only audio win is a no show
Ya punches is so so still undevolped like cell phone photos!!
-Nice wordplay with a personal, decent punch.


No respect only beat 4 vets i checked ya stats(1)
Nobody likes you!!...you getno replies on ya audio tracks!!
-Meh it was played out, tired of hearing that "you get no feedback on blah blah blah" Played


Your only chance to 'Elevate' is when you move in a month(2)
Yeah we know you 'Restricked'.....from throwing a dope punch!!(3)
-Ok punch, could've word a bit different.

Good name lame cuz yous a groupie 'laytext' wrap over a penis
He got a gallon of wackness.......annd only a 'Drop of Genius'!(4)
-Nice wordplay, the punch was good.


Overall=Nice verse man, had some ok wordplays and good punches. Flowed pretty well. The "explaining your punches" thing its getting played like a mu-fuckah.


Conclusion- Alright this battle was nice, Cali, your punches was decent had some good personals with OK wordplays. I started to re-read your verse, the "elevate month" thing was a bit played to me. The cellphone was creative nice. The part when you dissed his audio about not getting any feedback, you could've word it differently but it was a bit played to me. Lay-Text, nice verse, you had decent punches, with some good wordplays. Everyline was of your verse was creative sentences. There was one, played verse, the part when you said "god dont like ugly" line, man that's played. But i'mma have to vote LAY-TEXT because the man came out less played and harder punches. Cali next time, bring creativiness to the battle with your punches.


Pz

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