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Old 05-04-05, 05:00 PM   #13
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Voted For: Lay-Text

Dude is all mouth got k.oed by the last dude he called out
Left r.v for the fall?...of course all birds get called south!!
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first line is irrelivent ta you battlin him, an the second line reminds of a game line when he said somthin about the birds movin down south

No flow little homo only audio win is a no show
Ya punches is so so still undevolped like cell phone photos!!
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not a good bar, i was expectin alot better an not as basic from the punch in the second line, i'm dissapointed.

No respect only beat 4 vets i checked ya stats(1)
Nobody likes you!!...you getno replies on ya audio tracks!!
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thats a little better, nice personal

Your only chance to 'Elevate' is when you move in a month(2)
Yeah we know you 'Restricked'.....from throwing a dope punch!!(3)
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the first line just No lol...second line? it is veru unoriginal an uncreative, cali...wheres the fiyah u usaully droppin??

Good name lame cuz yous a groupie 'laytext' wrap over a penis
He got a gallon of wackness.......annd only a 'Drop of Genius'!(4)
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good name lame? not feelin that part, but the laytext wrapped over a penis was good had me like ''oooh''...good choice of words...the closer was again uncreative, an very very played, not the way u worded, but where u was trynna hit with the closing line is just played

Lay-Text:
Your Wack Kid....You Can't Handle The Shit That I'm Spittin..
Man..Your Reign Of RV Wasn't Short..Dude It Was Non-Existent..
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blah, first line was self glory, u revived it tho, nice punch in the second line.

Whats Funny Is..In Audio I've Heard Your Skill Compared To L.I..
A Top Vet?..Nah..Even DeadlyVision Said Your A Disgrace To A.I..
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okay, i dont know if L.I Is good or not, but once again....you hit hard with the disgrace ta A.I line.

Look Faggot You Can't See Me..Like Bats Looking At Red Signs..
And By Battling You...Rated Will Be Sure To Meet Dead Lines..
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nope, aint feelin that, thats your weakest bar.

You Were Born?! What Happen?...Dennis The Mennis Fuck Shamoo?
You Claim To Be God..and God Loves Ugly..So Then Out Came You..
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okay, okay, i'm really really feelin that punch, ''god likes ugly then out came u'' that shit had me like ''ooh''

Listen To Everyone..Your Wack..Man Let That Shit Get Through..
Since You Like Arrows...Lets Put It This Way...I'm > Than U..
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aint feelin the closer, i can see what u tried ta do, but naaaah, i aint feelin that.

On the whole, Cali u didnt drop anythin that made me wanna read it again, or even laugh....it was basically awhole bunch of personals u gatherd up which didnt make lay look like a fool, where as the disgrace ta A.I & God made ugly line really hit there mark, so on them 2 lines alone, the personal an punch side of the battle has too goto the more creative laytext

vote: Lay-Text

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