Voted For: Daubs

You had "one shot" to accept this, but at first ya chose to reject it..
Saw ya user title and avater....aint it time you got off ems dick!!
5...not a real gud opener, but not too bad!!
I personally dont think i should scare you, but obviousely my rhymes do.. ..E.. sounds kinda like a hallucination pill, so i got reasons to pop you!!
6...decent, gud meta and ya got links!!
Eventually accepted.......but begged for only 6 lines..
Crooked like a pirate.........so i bet he spits blind!!
5...weak closer!!

OVERALL: 16/30

this Daubs 15 years old kid without life clue,
ur crew living legendz keep u gether like white glue...
2...wtf!!! is this considered a punch!!
thats mens sperm u suck mens dick like ur wifes do...
iv seen urs and mads verse and thats bad,u have that,
1...wack, makes no sense!!
rhymes like my ass lack,talk to smash crap,i slash back...
Like u piss me whach ur metaphores,
diss me ye watewa whore.....
1...just plain wack!!

OVERALL: 4/30

weak battle........E came wack as fuck and structure was gay and lines weren't even punches. daubs came weak to had one decent bar but overall killed this fool with ease!! both need to elevate on punches and shit, get creative, put in mutlies, better wordplay n shit!!!!

V/ - Daubs

Return the favour on this shiznit!!
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