Yo fam your composin is off the meter, your a natural 4 composin.The only thing I think would have helped is if the bassline/synth had some sort of effect on it reverb/filter/ect.I think that would have made it sound a lil more recent.But dont get me wrong cuz I wuz still feelin U.Good shit keep it comin'

WL

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