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Old 05-04-05, 05:55 PM   #30
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Voted For: CA$per

thing is this guys obese,he just adds a k at tha end....
either that or you find spellin to hard to comprehend.....
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first bar had me like ''ooh''....good shit

2 dayz to drop dogg,man u sure u aint illiterite....
u let me battle u and u great aha aint u consederate...
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naaah, aint feelin dat.

uh-oh hear comez tha expected,"dog your a friendly ghost"....
what tha fukk is this a contest,on who can say it tha most....
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that was aight, i could see ya idea, maybe could of worded it a little better

dogg yer styles CRAMPED,u either a bitch or a fag…..
tha only time u “SHED BLOOD”is when u on yo monthly rag
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pretty played punch, but u served well enuff ta have an effective

This guys in tha jury, but guy is more like judge judy…..
Dogg u dreamin,get yo fam to kiss u sleepin beauty….
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LOL, Had me laughin, nice shit.

Casper:
pretty good verse, some played concepts, but u worded them ta your effect, good shit.....maybe could of added a little more on the personal side, but u still got my vote, fa sho.

Slob:
Casper? Such Creativity..Besides Urself, Hoo U Think Feelin U G?
High Losses..Like NBA Centers U Cant Win If U Always Friendly B
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naw, aint feelin dat at all, first line had no effect an the second is not a good concept ta roll with

Stupid Fag..Yo I Have Never Seen An Ignorant Fool This Bad!!!..
"Snype Ur Home" Away From U..So U Have "No Room" To Brag..
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okay, the second line had me like ''oooh''...definately the best u had ta offer.

Casper's Waitin For Action To Occur..Like Kids In College Dorms..
Dis "Livin Legend" Makes "Dead Inspirations" Glad Dat Dey Gone..
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c'mon man, u had a killer bar in the previous one, then ya dropped this, the second line seemed a little forced, but only u know if it was or not, mine is just an opinnon lol

A Win? Homie Like "Loose Holes" U Besta Believe I'm "Nailin It"..
Tranz$ferred To Casper, To Try N Win More Matches Wit An Alias..*
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that was an okay openin line, i was like yea somthin hot is comin...an it didnt, the second line had no meaning what so ever

Push Me? Makin Me "Break A Tear" Is Da Only Way Ull "Move Me"..
U Don Get Pussy..Cuz Casper Only Gets Bitches In Movies!!!..**
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very weak closer homie, the first line is kinda dissin yourself sayin he can make u cry lol....an the closer is just...well no, u shouldnt have used it lol

Slob:
ya verse had some okay wordplay, but the personals an punches just didnt hit

you had the highligh of the battle with that ''no room ta brag'' line, but you didnt have enuff consistancy throughout....casper came a little basic, but his shit had more consistancy an he stayed on point with the disses, so my vote goes ta casper.
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