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Old 05-04-05, 07:07 PM   #24
morse code
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Voted For: AutoMatik

I feel like I'm roughing up a retard, sparring with you...
Kid, you couldn't spit heat at a Mongolian barbeque...
4/10...wtf, wack attempted werdplay, sry
Trust me, your frees are ugly and your rhymes can't bust me..
Cuz the verses you spit are full of shit, like Huggies..
7/10...nice punch here but you had a filler
I doubt you own a gun, but I'm sure that you've 'packed shit'
So I'll cut out this fag's tongue and give him a new accent..
6/10...also nice play off of the earlier punch
You're clumsy with weaponry, so don't talk about automatics..
Because I'll shoot up your crib like baby heroin addicts...
6/10...nice punch/werdplay here
I'll stay silent and still merk you...and let the weapons talk for me...
Stick an 'L' in your bloody corpse and leave you with a sense of 'gLory'*
7/10...nice
60%

nice verse here, good punches and werdplay, okay structure good flow coodve used more multies and upped the vocab...never read your shit b4 but nice drop

Im Smashin This Ass, Torchin Your Names Bashin You Fast......
Nd I'll Take Your 'Shots' With 'Vodka' As If I Was 'Brakin The Glass......
8/10...nice opener
Aint Stop When I Blast, Ready To Die Soldier Theif This Win Like Someone Stole Her.....
Nd He Wouldnt Be Able To 'Katch Up' Even If I Put You On My Burger.....
6/10...also good
Step In The Ring IM Like Werd Herb, Then Destroy Your Spinal Cowrd.....
Nd Leave Your Chest With A Wider Hole, Then I'll 'Pop Shells, Like Sick Kids With 'Tylonal......
5/10...okay punch
You Aint 'Standin A Chance' To Win Geek, Like 'I Cut Of Your Legs......
Nd Your Rhymes Weak, Beat Me? Nah, Cus Hes Bragin Over A '3 Battle Win Streak?......
6/10
63%

nice verse here, good puncehs, and werdplay, good multies, once agains fix your structure though

wut got automatiks this win wuz his personals, he had good ones, while verbal didnt even have any...heres a wuick breakdown

opener:a
closer:v
punches:tie
werdplay:tie
personals:a
structure:v
multies:a

v/automatik
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