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05-04-05, 07:53 PM

Dervla

Poet's Daughter.

Posts: 360

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Nah, it wasn't deep ^^ as he said it was. Upp your vocab. The imaginary of this verse was weak, needs to add some wording correctly grammer. The emotion was ok, not DEEP. To upp your emotion, you need to use meta'z and not just plain simple sentences.

pz

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