Thread: Boomerang of Pain..
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Old 05-04-05, 08:07 PM   #3
Dervla
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Hmmmmm kid i like your style. Nice emotion expressing here. Nice flow here and there. Imaginary needs to be upped. Vocab needs to be upped. But great coming from the angle of emotion, keep writing.
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