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Old 05-04-05, 08:20 PM   #15
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Voted For: John Holmes

Your Wack Kid....You Can't Handle The Shit That I'm Spittin..
Man..Your Reign Of RV Wasn't Short..Dude It Was Non-Existent..

pretty weak opener, man... for a pink slip battle ya shoulda came out swinging like he spit on ya momz or sum'n...

Whats Funny Is..In Audio I've Heard Your Skill Compared To L.I..
A Top Vet?..Nah..Even DeadlyVision Said Your A Disgrace To A.I..

ok personal but wasn't really felin the rhyme here... LI AI... ehhh not too strong

Look Faggot You Can't See Me..Like Bats Looking At Red Signs..
And By Battling You...Rated Will Be Sure To Meet Dead Lines..

first part was ok... but the "meet deadlines" part was killer.... more lines like this would be an easy win

You Were Born?! What Happen?...Dennis The Mennis Fuck Shamoo?
You Claim To Be God..and God Loves Ugly..So Then Out Came You..

ewwwww... not good... this looks like sum'n from a dude that's getting better at text but ain't quite there yet... i see the effort but the punches are kinda soft

Listen To Everyone..Your Wack..Man Let That Shit Get Through..
Since You Like Arrows...Lets Put It This Way...I'm > Than U..

decent closer... but again... no bang... this shoulda been more amped than what it was... i've seen you spit way better than this




Dude is all mouth got k.oed by the last dude he called out
Left r.v for the fall?...of course all birds get called south!!

started off pretty good but the ending took away from it

No flow little homo only audio win is a no show
Ya punches is so so still undevolped like cell phone photos!!

again... started off great and faltered at the end...nice personal in the beginning

No respect only beat 4 vets i checked ya stats(1)
Nobody likes you!!...you getno replies on ya audio tracks!!

ouch!!!!...that one hurt... nice punch/personal

Your only chance to 'Elevate' is when you move in a month(2)
Yeah we know you 'Restricked'.....from throwing a dope punch!!(3)

blahhh... read it yaself... ya should already know... got more filler in there than twinkies...lol

Good name lame cuz yous a groupie 'laytext' wrap over a penis
He got a gallon of wackness.......annd only a 'Drop of Genius'!(4)

ok ending... rewording coulda made it better...seen cali come stronger than this also but he still gets the vote... verse was simply better in my eyes... respect to both..out
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