Voted For: Premanition

-Shard-
you lackin' ammunition Preman you on some Pre man shit
man if you take away this kid's facade..it'll just deman him
^^^^ 7/10 decent opener... could use some work

derailin' this cat so far...his bitch ass will never see mention
he has a train of thought... n' that shit has a steam engine!
^^^^ 6/10 nah not feeling it... sorry

your streak endin' cuz.. the only streak that i'm rueing for
is the bloody stains on my carpet when I'm through wit ya
^^^^ 8/10 pretty good hit

who this chump? Seriously just confess you a loser bitch
kids askin "who Preman?"..are fuckin' questionin' evolution!
^^^^ 7/10 decent hit

ya cred is loosened... if he considered the matter he'd fall
cred short like high schoolers applyin for masters degree jobs
^^^^ 6/10 nah not feeling the closer... sorry

34/50 = %68


-Premanition-
Your verse more effective wen ‘mirror image’ reflected
Only shock you’d bring be if a punch of yours connected
^^^^ 7/10 decent opener... second line kinda played out

Bitch them lines getting rejected like a faulty bar code
And you ain’t be’coming a custom’ like a dodgy car load
^^^^ 7/10 i like the wordplay on the first line... decent second line

Sold ur soul to the devel but he turned down the exchange
Shard my ‘sole’ on ur level in a place where gravity reigns
^^^^ 8/10 good hit... i like the wordplay, hit and personal

Just ‘cavity’ chains cos them threats are ‘hollow’ n plain
Tie u down to my ‘lines’, only time ur ass on the ‘train’
^^^^ 7/10 pretty good wordplay and hit

Aka the ‘mirror’, ‘image’ broken as I watch your ass fall
Then ask you politely….’who is the greatest of them all?’
^^^^ 8/10 hahaha... good closer... first line could of used work

37/50 = %74


Vote: Premanition




**no hate to either of you, just honest opinion**



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