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Old 05-05-05, 12:57 AM   #6
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Voted For: Solo

Put foot to ass have ya feelin the boot like ya journey in the RV tourney…*
Leave ya crippled with them stretched lines..sumone fetch me a gurney…**
^^nice opener, some decent multis..well semi multi's(werd-play)
It’s the everlasting truth that even the shit on my shoe is suprassing you…
Jury claim to be the illest crew, but ya siggy shows that ya just passin thru…***
^^lol,.dope punch, crew personal
Inevitable for you to choke like a B-Rabbit..its the turtle that wins the race…
But if ya do believe in miracles..maybe sum day The Jury will win a case…
^^ok, kinda filler
Solo still runs the courtroom..ya crew name derived from sumone skilled…****
Owned by a self-g line..I’m a hitman who been paid $ to have lob Killed…
^^good name play...good setup(boarderline selfglory thou)
Ya lack creativity..ya verses are all flat cuz ya spit 2-dimensional rhymes…
Confused? This retard needs special-ed so allow me to explain sum lines…
^^^this was the best punch in the entire verse...
that was a dope way to incorporate explanations without pissing off the reader, awesome concept solo
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Dis Herb Losin To "Queens" Niggas..Dats Y He Took Da "King" Out His Name Yo *
C'mon Man..U A Vet And Not In Da Top Ten? U Could Onli B Ranked But So-Low (Solo)
^^played personal, flow was awful., to stretched
U A Herb Child..This Illunitic Is Just "Spittin Cold"..Like "Eskimos Coughin"
U Aint Liked..Just Judgin From Your Name I Could Tell That U Get The Finger Often
^^no creativity with your punch, set up was ok
Think U Got It Made? How U Solo And U Depend On Crews For Top Aide
Imma Put This PUSSY On His Girl's HAIR..Now Dats Wat I Call BOX BRAIDS
^^bow braids..? not feeling the punch, meta was ok, but no punch
I Done Got U Beat..Solo Could Only Be "Light On His Feet" When "Battlin In Dark"
C Dat U Pushed Off..Unless U Said Ur "Bars On Glass"..They'll Never "Look Sharp"
^^wow, stretched n lost flow badly, punch was weak n didnt make sense
When U Spit A Verse..Voters Is Like "Rape Victims"..Dey Beggin U To "Please Stop"
U Not On Top..Imma Cut Open Ur Chest And Put Ur "Heart On A Pussy" To Form A "Beat Box"
^^beat box?...its not a punch man, metas are ok in ya verse
but you use them wrong, there not even punches, your flow is choppy n falls off on every bar, lines are stretched bad.
wasnt feeling any of your concepts, n you had relatively no real personals on this cat..
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overall i gotta go with solo, he brought alot more creativity
in his verse, n his delivery was better, n his closer was better
then slobs entire verse in my opinion.......
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!