Voted For: lyricalflowz

solo: A decent verse. The main thing it lacks is hard hitting punches. Some was self glorification (a no-no in battles), and some just didnt cut it in a battle situation. It flowed alright and the structure was original... Just the punches.... -_-

LF: Two or three nice lines. the rest were nothing to go "ooo" at, but were more than substantial, nonetheless. Metaphors and similes made the verse more interesting than solo's. Flow was fine. Nothing wrong with structure. Try to ease up on using links and explinations (**'s). People say a good line doesn't need to be explained. The ones you gave explinations to didnt need them anyway.

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