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IP:
This was a decent drop
you had some personals , you wrote this
as if you were battling cali .. and this is an om
so you would have to switch up your style , to drop an om
your punchlines were alittle shacky, some were hitten , and some
were just plain fillers.. structure was good ,
your flow was on point ...like tephlon said it probably would have been
better if you did it on the mic... but it was still a good drop
keep it up ..just work on your vocab usage and how you word
your bars ,... and use better direct punchlines .. to the person
your tryin to diss.. not just punchlines that could possibly
go to anyone , na'mean.. overall keep it up , hope to
see some more from you soon
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