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This was a nice peice i was really feeling it ..
You had nice emotions , good feeling going toward the peice..
Structure was good , flow was on point ,
you were going alittle off topic , but it was okay ,
Worplay was good , some of your bars were alittle simplicit
i felt it could have been alot better.. it was a decent drop
needs alittle work , overall keep it up , and drop alink
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