wow, this was a nice piece

cool story being told, didn't like the flow at times, thought some syllable counts were off a little, but overall, nice piece, i liked it...and the way you approached the topic as well...good name of the topic too, really put meaning infront of what was to come....

but i cant get over the closer, how it just hits ya and leaves you to think of the mass corruption in life these days, and how easily it can be compared to other aspects in life....overall, nice drop man

keep up

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