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Voted For: da Illest!!
wow, this was not a good battle
da illest, shit, your stuff was kinda on the disturbing side, but...it looks like you can get the hang of battling, you just need to elevate a bit more....everything was basic, had the right ideas, but you need to get good finishers, some stuff was even played....but you attempted more punches towards your opponent so you get the vote
uh lyrical clarity? i dont think so....way too many stretched lines, fake personals coming outta the wazooo, not really any good disses here at all, nothing creative....you gotta elevate a ton man......closer wasn't bad, but still your whole verse was whack and you really need to read some tutorials or somthing
v/da illest
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