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Old 05-06-05, 03:16 PM   #34
Kawn Flixx
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Ha this was a dope drop...
I Was realyl feelin it ... Nice creativity
Some dope punchlines...
You had nice structure .. i see you tried a new font
Looks pretty cool... Hhaha about newb bashing.
you had some nice personals , some bars were just fillers
this was a dope drop.. nice creativity... nice imagery ,
and good wordplay, and vocab usuage overall
keep it up
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