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Old 05-06-05, 07:36 PM   #14
MiSk
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From: North East
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sorry let me explain in more detail...

-Daubs-
You had "one shot" to accept this, but at first ya chose to reject it..
Saw ya user title and avater....aint it time you got off ems dick!!
^^^^ 9/10 hot opener... good personal

I personally dont think i should scare you, but obviousely my rhymes do.. ..E.. sounds
kinda like a hallucination pill, so i got reasons to pop you!!
^^^^ 8/10 kind of self glory... but funny as hell, good hit

Eventually accepted.......but begged for only 6 lines..
Crooked like a pirate.........so i bet he spits blind!!
^^^^ 8/19 haha...funny as hell, goot hit, good closer

25/30 = %83


-...E...-
yo...yo...yo....listen this daubs...

this Daubs 15 years old kid without life clue,
ur crew living legendz keep u gether like white glue...
^^^^ 5/10 your best line but could of been better

thats mens sperm u suck mens dick like ur wifes do...
iv seen urs and mads verse and thats bad,u have that,
^^^^ 4/10 not feeling this at all... sorry

rhymes like my ass lack,talk to smash crap,i slash back...
Like u piss me whach ur metaphores,
diss me ye watewa whore.....
^^^^ 3/10 doesnt make sense... and is that a 7th line in a 6 line battle?

Vote: Daubs



**just honest opinion**



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