Rastafari Walk Tall
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Voted For: Daubs
LMAO at dis wack xcuse 4 a battle..Dabus shat all over dis bre..gd holdin it down bre
E = 1) u hav aname dat was created 2 b ripped, u need 2 change it homie, some doper cats cud own u wid jus wordplay of that...ur drop was generic, weak-hittin, impersonal, uncreative lines..only things that were nice were ur structure, syllable count n flow...Work on wittier, more creative lines that are personal about ur oppponent
Dabus: fix ur structure, n flow, decent personals, medium hiting bars, enuff 2 merk dis kid...work on better flow write 2 a beat if it helps yo...
RTF - link in sig ma battle wid MAd Dog (2-2)...or my battle wid EC in audio battles forum (3-0)
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