sup man...

nice presentation lol

for being such a short piece it was surprisingly dope...your vocab was excellent and conveyed that ur obviously smart and you used sparingly but in the right places..your images came through clearly and emotion was created well..i like the rehetorical question in the last line it worked well

my best line:
"Blind to the facts ungranted wishes"

Next time: lets c a longa drop, address a more original topic, keep em comin

RTF link in sig...me v Mad Dog..Peace

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