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IP:
This was an iight open mic,
Could have been alot better.. but it was decent
Structure from both was good , Try to match up your bars
and not have some bars stretched...
Hell fires verse was iight , Some bars were filllers..
Kesse's verse was tight , ha you had some dope punchlines..
Nice creativity.. and nice wordplay and vocab ,
overall it was a decent peice.. could have been alot better...
Needs improvement in wordening your bars,
and not having as much fillers ... keep it up
and drop a link or this will be closed
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