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This was a pretty nice peice...
Flow was good ,...structure was also good...
You had some nice punchlines ...
Some were just plain fillers ...
You had some nice wordplay , and use of vocab...
You need to chill on using''' when you dont need em
you point out every little punch you got
and it really doesnt need it ... overalll it was a decent drop
could have been alot better... if it had more direct and hotter
punchlines,and less fillers... keep it up and drop a link or this will be closed
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