Voted For: MiSk

Misk

Before this nigga even attempts to battle, I already declare own-age
smashing him up like a "Chris-tal" bottle on a ships maiden voyage *1
^^^IIGHT OPENER
I'm tha captain on this ship, called tha MiSk SS-12
if you were smart you'd keep ya lyrics back up on tha shelf
^^^NICE PUNCH
This counterfeit emcee really tries, afta each battle he posts his excuse
these "hits" are givin' him nightmares of his forgotten "child-abuse" *2
^^^HAHA GOOD WORDPLAY I LIKE DAT LINE
~christyles~ took me lightly, didnt realize I'm "native" to this son
this isn't a "raindance", its called beating you in this battle like a "wardrum" *3
^^^O.K CLOSURE

things i liked.....
u had lotz of good punches but sum came weak
i liked ur wordplay and vocabulary diction
structure wuz nice n readable
u jus need to keep elevatin n u b str8
decent verse
8/10


Christyles

this battles gonna be a murkin, scrub thought he could take me?/
i come "punchin" and throw more "knock-outs" than joyce gracie!/
^^^NICEEEEEEE WORDPLAY WUZ GREAT
i come stabbin and bust-nuts with quick knife-cuts/
so sick i give this fool more diseases than fucked-sluts/
^^^SELF GLORY......NO-NO
my verses so ill i eradicate entire african nations/
kid comes spittin with writtens, spliced frames with no verbal animations/
^^^HAHA NICE LINE
this kids flow is so dry, you'd think he'd be makin "ice"/
to bad the only thing hes "freezin" is pre-cooked rice!/
GOOD, DECENT CLOSURE

things i liked....
i liked da wordplay and personals
ur punches wuz hittin n da structure wuz str8

things i didnt like....
u used "Self Glory" in sum lines....use doze lines 4 punches instead of saying how great a battler u are
jus keep elevatin n u b good
overall decent verse but self glory killed u
elevate b/c u r on ya way nice verse
7.5/10

VERY CLOSE BATTLE YALL BUT MA VOTE GOES 2
...............MISK
V/MISK

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