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Old 05-06-05, 10:01 PM   #12
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Voted For: Solo

::..:$lobK::..: verse:

Dis Herb Losin To "Queens" Niggas..Dats Y He Took Da "King" Out His Name Yo *
C'mon Man..U A Vet And Not In Da Top Ten? U Could Onli B Ranked But So-Low (Solo)
I can't like this line, because I just read a KORV battle with solo, and this is played, and alot of other people said this also.

U A Herb Child..This Illunitic Is Just "Spittin Cold"..Like "Eskimos Coughin"
U Aint Liked..Just Judgin From Your Name I Could Tell That U Get The Finger Often
Same thing, I couldnt feel this line because it's not my first time seeing it

Think U Got It Made? How U Solo And U Depend On Crews For Top Aide
Imma Put This PUSSY On His Girl's HAIR..Now Dats Wat I Call BOX BRAIDS
Not that hard hitting to me. I think this one couldve been wayy better

Done Got U Beat..Solo Could Only Be "Light On His Feet" When "Battlin In Dark"
C Dat U Pushed Off..Unless U Said Ur "Bars On Glass"..They'll Never "Look Sharp"
Didnt make the most of since...

When U Spit A Verse..Voters Is Like "Rape Victims"..Dey Beggin U To "Please Stop"
U Not On Top..Imma Cut Open Ur Chest And Put Ur "Heart On A Pussy" To Form A "Beat Box"
Stretched, but by far your hardest line. Nice closer

This was a really slow lacking verse in my opinion. It seemed like every attempt at a punch/personal has been said already and takes alot of points away. I wasn't too much feeling this verse, although, excluding your last bar, you had good flow and structure to your verse. I can't give you my vote simply because you lacked creativitie in my opinion



Solo's verse

Put foot to ass have ya feelin the boot like ya journey in the RV tourney…*
Leave ya crippled with them stretched lines..sumone fetch me a gurney…**
Yea, this had nice wordplay in it. Nice opener, nice punchline

It’s the everlasting truth that even the shit on my shoe is suprassing you…
Jury claim to be the illest crew, but ya siggy shows that ya just passin thru…***
Dope personal. Nice punch, and all that. This was creative

Inevitable for you to choke like a B-Rabbit..its the turtle that wins the race…
But if ya do believe in miracles..maybe sum day The Jury will win a case…
Not that hard hitting of a punchline, but just ight for me.

Solo still runs the courtroom..ya crew name derived from sumone skilled…****
Owned by a self-g line..I’m a hitman who been paid $ to have lob Killed…
This couldve been better. I think you tried wayy too hard to play off his name

Ya lack creativity..ya verses are all flat cuz ya spit 2-dimensional rhymes…
Confused? This retard needs special-ed so allow me to explain sum lines…
Nice closer, but not a hard hitting punch

You came out prepared from the start it looked like, and I can see you were creative. You had some good punchline personals that gave you major points in this battle. Your verse flowed well, and I think you improved majorly in wordplay. I gave you my vote because I felt you came more original in this one, and you had harder punches. Not a big suprising battle, but just a win for you. I think your closer was dope, and it went well with your explainations which also gave you alot of point.


Solo gets my vote. Please RTF on battle link in the bottom of sig please.


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