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Old 05-07-05, 12:16 PM   #4
Dabatos
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looking for best song of the week.

listeningooh.. very nice beat.. i like it.. lol...

your quality is okay.. not great.. not bad.. the delivery is okay.. your flow is pretty good.. lyrics are good.. but sometimes its hard to understand your lyrics..

chorus: Chorus is pretty nice.. but show more emotion on that part.. but very creative on the chorus..

basiclly the songs good.. just have way better quality.. and show more emotion.. well your lyrics have good emotion... its just your voice that doesn't show much emotion.. it sounds like your just reading of your lyrics man.. next time try to remeber it.. well i may be wrong.. hopefully i ain't.. cuz if u did remember it?? oh man that ain't good lol
7/10
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