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Old 05-07-05, 01:51 PM   #7
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Quality is ehhh is aight, could been betta, chorus u could it make it more catchy cuz chorus is the most important thang in a song it catches the listener....

verse was str8 flow on and off i liked the 2nd verse betta.......ok dawg try to do less sybles cuz u kinda strugglin wit long sentences.....try to shorten it up. it will help trust me i had the same problem this was aight.....i exprected lil betta from ya fam
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