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Nice drop... i was really feelin it
It was very deep, had lots of emotions..and good feeling
Structure was good ,... wordplay , and vocab were aswell good
i felt it could have been alittle better if you would have made it alittle longer
You had nice multies..some were alittle forced though but it was good
Overall nice drop keep it up, just elevate on worden your liens and making
More imagery , so the reader can become attracted and image what happening in
there mind...Pz, nice drop
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