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This was a dope drop.. it had nice imagery,
and some dope emotions.. good feeling
The only thing that through me off was the structure..
but that can be worked on..
Flow was on point...Rhyme Sheme was good ,
You had some hot multies...Nice wordplay , and vocab usauge
it was a good peice.. just the structure through the reader
off and didnt make the reader want to read it..
Overall keep it up and drop a link or this will be closed
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