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Ha this was dope, i was really feeelin this..
Very Creative.. Nice flow it was on point..
Structure was good , made the reader want to read what
you had to say... Wordplay and vocab was on point..
It was really a deep drop..
you had nice imagery , and good emotions going into the drop
Nice closer, and good opener.. i was really feelin this drop..
It was a good peice.. had everything, in it a well rounded verse
Overall keep it up
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