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Old 05-07-05, 08:43 PM   #18
Kawn Flixx
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This was a good drop.. nice i was really feeling it
you had lots of nice multies.. really had a rhythem..
Nice rhyme scheme... Structure was decent..
You had nice usuage of vocab , and wordplay were great..
Nice deep words you were using which created alot
of imagery ,nice emotions and good feeling
going into this drop a very nice drop..
keep it up
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