hmmm listenin again... dv has a wierd flow but it stays on que f'sho i like ur voice dv shyt is word. chorus by 73 i guess... yea chorus is aight.. shit is mad old i know it... cali u got potiential like i said b4, but honestly flow was waaaaaayyyy off. a good thing u could do is count ur bars, like make sure to spot out a sound or sumthin at the end of every time the beat loops n make sure ur "end rime" word goes there. just sum hints i hope u find helpfull.

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