View Single Post
Old 05-07-05, 11:53 PM   #10
Restricted
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
Restricted's Avatar
 
Posts: 3,774
From: Pittsburgh, PA
IP:

Voted For: Bonecollector

Aight Check It..

Bonecollecor: Hottest Line

Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit...
Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit...

Evolution: Hottest Line

rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard
cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved

Overall: I Would Give This Battle To Bonecollector For The Simple Fact That His Wording Had The Concepts and Devlievry A Battle Vesrse Should Have. He Had Better Punches and Personals.

Evolution, Just Work On Wording...Your Hottest Line Could've Beat His Whole Verse If You Woulda Worded It Better. Use More of A Metaphor.

~R~

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.