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Old 05-08-05, 12:49 AM   #16
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This was feedback posted for illest freestyler

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whacckkkk no offense but you fucking suck................... don't quit your day job.... haha! on tha real tho you had a couple nice punches but that rhyme and flow technique is missin... Take a poetry lesson or somethin to help you out. or juss go buy an em or pac cd. (or Bone) battle me! you set it up.. aftah i win i'll hit u with some more advice iight yung one
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Heres a little freestyle.....
First of all/ fuck guns... knifes are more personal/
i don't need no arsonel to disgrace you/
i'd take you outta this place fool, before you could say shoot/
I stay tough, cause sagnasty streets stay rough/
all we 'bout is makin that papah
no time for this no skill wannabe fakah/

That was quick with no punches, you want to get ripped to pieces hit me up anytime i'm down for audio or anything~
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