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Voted For: Mc KassaNova
onesided battle...
Kas- somma your wordplay is forced but I dug somma it... likewise with multis you tryna string out across a whole line... the syllabic count don't always match up... regardless...the concepts WERE there... and you did a pretty good job on this one...
Free- Your battle seemed like your namesake... a freestyle... no complexity or wittyness whatsoever... your punches weren't all that strong... that star wars shit actually reflected bad on you as opposed to dissing your opponent... keep writin, but work on your wordin' n' concepts next time...
Vote Mc KassaNova
rtf...
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