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Voted For: Evolution
Evolution
bone.. u know u shouldn’t be here.. no need for frontin
aint faced a dude this wack in awhile.. should’ve seen this comin
^ opener coulda been better bit too basic for me
ya text is nothin.. all those weak punches u be writing.. is lame
cuz u get called Wack so much.. its practically ur nickname
^ this is an aight bar better than the opener good flow
rv money is nuttin.. kid thinks he’s rich.. watch ur value fall hard
cuz I told bone to put his money where his mouth is.. & starved
^ good punch liked it
u might as well give it up.. ur just wack, played & this is done
so to define ur ass..................go on & ^.. pick either one
^ lol good good this prolly ya best bar
they say we need at least more than 6 hrs of sleep.. fuck that.. bitch
I mean.. RV should get two more hrs.. after reading ur shit
^ na not feelin it again like the opener basic
Overall
Good verse but it was the opener and closer that let you down on this IMO internally was good some good punches, rhyming was basic no multies metas none, personals none bar the money in ya mouth bit but i think that was layout for ya punch so no personals...coulda been better but good drop
Bonecollectors
Your names Evolution , but its seems you havent evolved abit...
Your still half assed rhymes...With punchlines that hardly hit...
^ aight opener nuthin special i seen a lot of people start off like this
....Untouchable huh?...
^ Right i can understand where u puttin this it amplifies flow
......But yet ill send punches to ya face with out any trouble....
.......Cus ill tap you and you'll pop! , just like a soap bubble....
^ good bar but the untouchable but shoulda jus joined although it would look stretched good none the less though
Your area code is more then your post count how wack r you?!...
Cus your just a Unknown account... Like Evolution Who?...
^ good liked this
............................So ^lucifier^ ...Mind if I end your reign...
Shyt Just Call me Mary Jane, the way i fuck w/ your brain...
^ self-g blah
...............And have you doing shyt that you cant explain...
Like how'd i lose? but yet look your at the bottom of the food chain...
^ closer is...i dunno i'm not seeing the connection there not feelin it like 1st cat
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Again good verse wit improvements i was likin it up until the self glory bit sorta to the end you fell but you were better in the majority of ya verse opener again was basic but you picked up decently from there fell off near the end again no multies metas none flowed structure good but this is gonna be tough to call ima vote...
Evolution...jus purely outta conisistancy...RTF in my sig within 3 days or vote removed
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Originally Posted by High Dro
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Originally Posted by ∆ P E X X
i'm still tryin to figure out how bein born in another country makes somebody fake.
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R.I.P OMB
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