Voted For: CrazyDogg
you the biggest bitch on rv, repin avy's like feliux(the cat)
how the hell you suppose to be good,and ya wins is minus/
weak opener
claiming people garbage,but whos really oscar the grouch/
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=187490 u just a fag,that like to take shots to the mouth/
below decent, punch
catch you on block and the ak will spit,like chew/
your flows are shitty,thats proly why u doo doo/
nah
you never was crazydogg you was just alittle fiesty/
you just a faggot ass cali boywho though he was nice g/
could’ve been harder
i know its tough on you every time you take an L/
but i'll split your brain anyway like,a fucken atoms cell/
decent
Overall: work on ur punches, make ur flow extend more &
add some personas in ur punches, but overall u need to elevate
some more metaphor
Bitch thinks that.......um... I'm a newbie, but we neva met before....
This guys sick....and I don't mean in skill....it's just a metaphor....
avg opener
He's gonna screw up this whole show....like country artists at da VMA's....
When I give this guy a 'fortune' cookie...is the only time he'll see 'change'...
nah, weak punch here
Imma merk you kid you should just quit.....fuck it I might as well just erase ya...
Make ya ass leave RV quick....then we'll another herb will register and replace ya....
repeated lines are kinda wack here
This guys got nearly 250 posts and still he calls out the noobies of RV....
Bitch with callouts like that.....I know that theres no way you can harm me....
decent punch
Dogg....don't step to someone like me...cuz you can't and won't prevail....
Your title is actually the result of your penis.....on a weight scale!
good closer
Overall: u had some decent punches here, the structure was a lil off
The flow was pretty decent & the vocab here was good, overall tho
Fix ur structure & come with harder punches next time.. but decent
Drop from you though…
RTF CrazyDogg
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