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Old 05-08-05, 02:33 AM   #35
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Voted For: Pandemonium

Call Him The Burnt Face Guy??? Well, What More Can I Say,
Except For Muh Ass Looks Betta Den Ur Face....On A Bad Day,*
weak opener
Murc'll Kill U In This Thread, And Tear Out Pandemoniums Particles,
U Scared? O Bitch U Worry/Obituary More Den Newspaper Articles,
ok, decent
Dese Punches Hit U Internally,So Watch As Pand's Soul Decreases,
And Then I Play With Pand's "Life", Like Scatterin Monopoly Pieces,
nope
Oh Lord, Pand's Gettin Chopped To Pieces With Punches, Less Den He Deserve,
So Watch As I Find "Pand" "A"/Panda A Better Place, Like Switchin Wildlife Reserves,
nope

overall u had a weak drop, those punches weren’t all that hard
hittin, I’ve seen better from u Murc, but overall you need to come
more harder than that next time though.. 5/10


Murcinal chances of winning is minimal, ya justa clown.
If you think your going pound for pound, I'll knock ya game down an ounce.
wack opener
He toggles more knobs, than a locksmith, so he's mastered the craft.
Cuz' the only way you'd be stiff competition, is if I left you in a body cast.
decent
An' like couch potatoes, your chances of winnings remote.
I just ripped out the fucking batteries, I'm nowhere near yo scope.
avg punch here
After this merking, you'll have to configure yet another name.
Well at least your'e hot...
Cuz' you got shot down in flame's!
ur best line yet

overall u had an aight drop, ur punches were pretty decent
but could’ve been better though.. ur structure was decent &
ur flow was average.. but overall ur closer took this one for you
6/10

RTF ON ONE OF MY BATTLES PANDEMONIUM


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