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Old 05-08-05, 02:40 AM   #10
Cocaine
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Voted For: Limited Edition

Bringin' heat with you..? Bitch you just best begone...
I will say you ain' wack at all...your 'OneStepBeyond'...
kinda played here, but its still good
That's fact, ain' opinion...thats just your evalutation..
'Cause bein' dope is one step beyond your imagination...
never seen this 1 b4, nice punch
You pursuin' a dream...well let me enduce a nightmare...
Only if I was as wack as you, would make this fight fair...
weak punch here, not really feelin this one
What the fuck is 'S-Bury'? Oh wait...I get it that's great...
The only beef you could bring...is a fuckin' Salsbury steak...
nice
Dawg before you step up...better get some practices...
Because your losses like ya name...'JustAsPackedAsThis'...
decent closer

overall… you had a nice drop, those punches were hardhittin
all the way thru ur verse, except for 1 or you of them, but you
had a nice flow, good structure, & the punches were good overall
you had a nice drop… 7/10


you must be stupid as them cuz to beat me ya need you and a friend,
you no showed on my alias and i won't blame you if you do it again,*
weak
im bringin punchlines when its crunchtime till your ass is all depressed,
Limited Edition?!?! yeah right.... when lyrically your just like all the rest,
wha? Wack punch here
read this and be pissed off...oh well.. but i just want it took all intense,
you bein seein more 'posts against you' than bein pushed on a fence,
ur best line here
i don't about you votin for skriptz.. meh.. so i'll be takin both ya lives,
us battling is 'point'less... like 2 men... both with broken knives...
the wording was wack, punch was weak

overall… you had an aight drop, most of your punches were wack except
for 1.. ur structure was in place, the flow was pretty decent, and some multies
were aight, but overall elevate on ur punches, cuz those shits were weak no
hate though.. 5/10

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