Good concept right here with very strong and raw emotion. Vocabulary was excellent, found nice balance between basic and complex. Imagery was great, some things in there made me stand still and think about it for a little while. Nice piece, enjoyed reading it!

Ending was my favorite part:

I have tasted many times the flavor of remorse,
The guilt stays there no matter how far away the feeling you try to force,
A slight impression will forever remain heavy on your heart,
You only learn how to block it as your mind departs (moves on).

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