Voted For: Pandemonium
Pandemonium- you had a very strong verse i just didn't like your structure. but besides that everything else was on key you had a average opener and a sorta weak closer but you had alot of really good metaphors with some mediocre wordplay but overall i just thought your verse had a better flow and went over smooth when saying out loud.
murcinal i- i liked your verse as well but i don't think it was as hard as pands you had some good wordplay and all but besides that i just thought it was a little to basic and lacked creativity . your rhyme scheme was't bad ... but then again it wasnt amazing .. either way i liked your verse because it had a few nice lines...
props to both of you
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