Voted For: LFS The Great

ight htis was a damn good battle fams but i gotta vote

so my vote goes to LFS

explanation:

Lfs verse had some pretty creative personals and some good wordplay

LFS:
Punches- Creative and some what humerous, Yet hard hittin n very creative when worded
Personals- Creative n hard hittin

example personal:
I don't bother readin ya verses they got natrual viscosity,**
How you gon be a livin legend when died wit no legacy,
(ight that was good wordplay and a nice personal)

Flow- was nice and steady which made it easy to read and stay in toon wit
strucutre- nice strucutre, even bars most the way , easy to read
Multies- descent use of multies, jus elevate on them a lil bit


Lyrical:
Punches- You came with the same set up as u did n other battles, most is smash mouth but pretty basic fam, get a lil more creative wit them

Personals- descent use of personlas but not as creative

example personal
Ay yo LFS THE GREAT came back 4 anotha murkin
Punches hit hard dey leavin dis nigga internally hurtin
(ight yes u did beat him, but this is now, wasnt feelin it fam)

flow- good flow easy to keep with
multies- good use of multies, they matched wit ya flow
structure- good structure as well, lil stretched, but nice
wordplay- came a lil basic, in this one not as creatvie vocab

this battle was hard to vote on, but im jus helpin people get they battles voted on

phewwww real good battle hated top vote but had to

vote goes to LFS, liked his creative vocab and stronger personals

both elevate on some keiner punches, get a lil more creative


good battle fams

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