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Old 05-08-05, 02:19 PM   #23
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kassanova: some of yer lines seem like you tryin to be complex without being good, and some multis a lil forced (quiver in quickness?). a few of the couplets were too uneven as well so didn't flow well.
best lines were probably tha angry saliva one, and tha deliver the sickness line.

illest: wasn't feelin any of yer lines really. nothin hit hard and didn't get what tha caps were for. you put ** next to yer second line and tha explanation had nuttin to do with it...until i read further on n saw you had ** next to another line....which was wack anyway. flow was off as well and overall tha verse was basic...
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