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Old 05-08-05, 02:36 PM   #3
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Word, I already saw this one

Feel the emotion was the strongest aspect of this piece and I love how you portrayed it from different points of view. Emotion from the man as well from the woman were very strong and you worded everything in such a vivid way. I could picture everything as if it was a movie. Imagery was great as well, had flow on lock and structure was nice.

Dope piece!
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