Thread: Tstorm vs Shard
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Old 05-08-05, 03:19 PM   #12
Armada Da 187
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Voted For: Tstorm

votin for Re

Re got this due to way more creative punches and personals

Re
Punches- creative, hard hittin, very well delivered... nice
Personals- lil basic not as hard but very creative.... nice
flow- on the point, very easy to stay with.... nice
strucutre- nice and easy to read, easy to stay wit... nice
multies- didnt notice anyway... so elevtae on them some

favorite line:
You need more than luck to win..but theres no four-leaf-clover
No chance of improving ya interlect,....coz ya "schoolings over"*****
(nice way to close it off, nice punch as well)

Shard
Punches- a lil basic, some were hard others not, elevate on full hard punches threw ya whole verse

nah punchline:
ya cartiledge in nose broke.. kid watch doubt rush your cred
sculpt more chips off ya face than a Mount Rushmore head
(nah wasnt feelin it, weak, not impressing)

Personals- basic, some hard some not once again, get stronger
flow- good flow, nice
strucutre- nice and even
multies- didnt see any... elevate on those

elevate on ya multies n get harder punches and personals

both elevate on multies


good battle fams

vote goes to Re for harder punches and creative personals


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