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 Voted For: Tstorm
 votin for Re
 
 Re got this due to way more creative punches and personals
 
 Re
 Punches- creative, hard hittin, very well delivered... nice
 Personals- lil basic not as hard but very creative.... nice
 flow- on the point, very easy to stay with.... nice
 strucutre- nice and easy to read, easy to stay wit... nice
 multies- didnt notice anyway... so elevtae on them some
 
 favorite line:
 You need more than luck to win..but theres no four-leaf-clover
 No chance of improving ya interlect,....coz ya "schoolings over"*****
 (nice way to close it off, nice punch as well)
 
 Shard
 Punches- a lil basic, some were hard others not, elevate on full hard punches threw ya whole verse
 
 nah punchline:
 ya cartiledge in nose broke.. kid watch doubt rush your cred
 sculpt more chips off ya face than a Mount Rushmore head
 (nah wasnt feelin it, weak, not impressing)
 
 Personals- basic, some hard some not once again, get stronger
 flow- good flow, nice
 strucutre- nice and even
 multies- didnt see any... elevate on those
 
 elevate on ya multies n get harder punches and personals
 
 both elevate on multies
 
 
 good battle fams
 
 vote goes to Re for harder punches and creative personals
 
 
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